My new hobby had
generated a 30,000 word manuscript in a couple of weeks. I spent the next few
months grabbing my laptop at every opportunity and tweaking the existing plot
or writing new material. In my own head the book had a good structure. There
were clearly only a dozen or so main characters, although I had added a bunch
of others to add a bit of colour or share an interesting aside. It was obvious
to me where the main thread of the story lay, it would be clear to everyone
else too. Wouldn’t it?
That’s when someone
pointed out that I actually had 23 main characters and about another 20 others
who were introduced and quickly dropped. Anyone reading the book would not know
which were the important ones and which would never appear again. Thai names
are often one syllable nicknames, it was actually not that easy, even to
remember who the main characters were.
That was when my dream
of being a novelist died. The book would never work as a novel but had
potential as a series of inter-linked short stories. I started to cut and paste
and discovered that I had about a dozen quite distinct plot lines. “Thai
Lottery”, the novel was about to become “Thai Lottery… and Other Stories from
Pattaya, Thailand”.
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